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The Date Part 2

“I’m sorry to hear that Katie,” Tate said to her on his cell phone.  Katie had just called to tell him that she won’t be able to make it to their date they planned that day.  They were going to meet each other at a diner to have lunch together originally, but she called at the last minute to cancel for a family reason.

“I’m sorry too,” Katie said over the phone, “I wish I could come, but my grandma is in the hospital and I have to go see her right away.”

“I understand,” Tate said, “Let’s do this next weekend then, alright?”

“Yeah,” she said, “See ya.”  She hung up and Tate put his phone back in his pocket.  He was already at the diner in a booth.

“Oh well,” he said to himself, “I might as well get something to eat while I’m here anyhow.  Too bad she couldn’t get here.  I got all ready for her and everything.”  He was dressed casually since they were going to meet in a public place and even took a shower before coming.  He also happened to use his brother’s body spray since he was once again in a hurry.

“Is that you Tate?” a soft and pleasant voice said to him.  He turned to the left and saw one of his classmates from school, Nicole.  She had 5 classes with him and was also one of Katie’s friends.  She had short black hair, light green colored eyes, and was one inch shorter than him.

“Hi Nicole,” he said to her as sighed, “How are you?”

“Fine,” she said with a smile, “How about…”

She stopped in midsentence as a wonderful fragrance entered her nose.  She felt happy, great, excited, and a little bit of something else.  Little did she know, what was happening to her had happened to her friend.  She looked at Tate and thought, ‘Is that it?  Is this smell coming from him?  It’s making me so… great… I don’ know why, but I feel so drawn to him.’

“Do you mind if I sit with you?” she asked with a smile.

“Sure,” Tate said, “You can.”  He didn’t mind and he didn’t suspect anything at all.  They were just regular friends after.

She nodded and sat down across the table from him.  As she sat down, she began to experience some body changes.  Her eyelashes grew a bit, her lips plumped up, and her teeth became bleached white.  Tate blinked his eyes for second to make sure he wasn’t going crazy.  Her face was different now.

He shrugged it off though.  ‘It’s probably nothing,’ he thought to himself, ‘I’m probably imagining it.”

She stared at him for a while, still smiling away.  Tate wasn’t really paying attention though.  His mind was still set on Katie and how she was doing.  ‘Why isn’t he looking at me?’ Katie thought to herself, ‘Why won’t he look at me?’

She clenched her hands tightly in her lap as her fingernails suddenly grew.  She looked down in surprise at her nails just in time to see her chest grow.  Her breasts went from B cups to C cups quickly.  Just as soon as her chest stopped growing, her shirt tighten and flaunted her bigger chest outward.

She smiled at her new chest as pleasure filled her body after the change.  She stroke and felt them happily.  She stopped immediately, however, after Tate looked back at her.  He didn’t notice any of the changes when he looked at her, but he soon notice her large chest and couldn’t help but stare at it in surprise.

She became happy once again at the fact that he was staring at her and noticing her new breasts. ‘Wow,’ she thought to herself, ‘I would normally slap at guy was staring at my chest before, but now I can’t help but want a guy to look at me that way.  Don’t know why, but after since I got a whiff of that smell, I just can’t help myself.’

“Umm…” Tate said suddenly in an attempt to get his mind off her new chest “Do you want a drink or something?”

“Sure,” she said staring at him happily, “But I’ll get them.  What do you want?”

“I’ll have a Coke,” he said.

“Alright,” she said sitting up, “I’ll be right back.”  She got up from her spot and walked over to the counter.  As she got up, Tate noticed that her legs were longer and her jeans were also different as well.  They used to stretch all the way down her legs, but now the pant legs ends above her knee caps.

“What the…” Tate mumbled as he watched Nicole walk to the counter, “What’s going on?  Is she changing like Katie did on our first date?”

Nicole was completely happy by the changes, but mostly because her mind was also changing along with her body.  The sexier she became, the more promiscuous her mind and herself became.   Whether she realized it or not, she was accepting of the situation happening to her.

She ordered the drinks and waited at the counter until they were filled.  As they’re drinks were filled, her dirty tennis shoes transformed into pink, shining high heels.  Following that, her butt expanded and her hips widen, giving her a round ass.  She felt her new rounded bottom and felt an immense amount of pleasure in doing so.

‘This is great!’ she thought happily to herself, ‘I’m becoming so sexy!  Wait until all the guys who turned me down for date see me!  They’ll wish they had me as they’re girlfriend now!’  She received the drinks from the person behind the counter and returned over to Tate.  As she walked, her back arched extending her bust outward and showing off her behind from behind.

“Ah…” Tate said as he stared at Nicole, “Are you ok?”

“I’m fine,” she cooed as she handed the drink to him and sat back down in her spot.  He nodded and looked down at the table, trying to make eye contact with her.

She frowned and thought to herself, ‘Why is he ignoring me?  I wish he look at me again!”  The fragrance from Tate drifted back into her nose and pleasure rushed throughout her again causing some more changes.  Her shirt’s hemline and neckline shrank, showing off her cleavage and revealing her belly button.

Nicole moaned pleasurably and rubbed her hands all over herself happily.  Tate heard her moans and looked up.  He saw her new clothing look and was surprised once more.  ‘She is changing like Katie did!!’ he thought to himself, ‘Oh man!  What am I going to do?’

She saw that he was looking at her.  ‘Perfect,’ she thought to herself.  She then took another, deeper smell of the fragrance emanating off of him.  With this whiff, the pleasure was so strong that she felt like she would explode or something.

“Excuse me,” she said with a strong, sexual and alluring voice, “I… have to go the bathroom.”  She rushed out of her spot and ran into the ladies room, locking it behind her.

“I think it is time to ago,” Tate said reaching into his pocket and pulling out some money.  He ran over to the counter, handed the man behind it a ten dollar bill, and ran out.

“Don’t you want your change?” the guy called to the fleeing teenager.

“Where did Tate go?” a girl said.  The man turned and saw Nicole standing at the counter.  She was surprisingly, back to normal for some reason.

“He ran out,” the man said, “He paid the bill so you don’t need to worry about paying for the drinks.”

“Alright,” she said.  She walked out of the diner and into the parking lot.  She saw Tate and his car were already gone.

“Oh man,” she mumbled to herself as she rubbed her head, “I got to apologize to him!  I don’t know what happened!  I was so happy and so attracted to him that I started to lose it.  I just… started turning into someone I was not.  I was trying to fight it, but I couldn’t.  I thought I would lose myself in that bathroom, but at the last moment, I gained control.  What happened?”
This is a follow up to my previous story, The Date. The idea mostly stays the same, I but I decided to change the female lead in this story. The only thing I didn't like about this one was the ending, but I really couldn't come up with anything and I wasn't really interested in adding more of the transformation in it.

Like before, the story is left open to add another part to it. I don't have much to say other than I hoped you enjoyed it.
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AshK1980 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Good work! Time to Fave!
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goingtoregetthis Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Please continue its not that I like the bimbo part it just that for some reasons I like stories with some form of mind control/alteration.
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Enron-II Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
While I'm not overly into bimbo TF's, for some reason this is well written enough that I feel compelled to wait for another part, if you ever plan to do one...
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Firingwall Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Nowadays, I'm not much into bimbo tf stories. Most of them, if you read them, are very sexist and creepy. It's like no one can write one without any form of malice towards women in them.
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Enron-II Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
That's generally why I never can get into them, but this story seems to avert this by making the effects temporary, and never seems to get overtly racy. For that reason, I was able to read it and not get annoyed by possible chauvinism.

Honestly, I wanted to see more mostly because I want to see that brother that had the body spray in the first place get his come-up-ance.

In fact, I only "do not dislike" bimbo stories if they one of the following:

- The one(s) that changed the victim(s) get their just dues, and hopefully the victims get better.
- Punishing a chauvinistic man.
- Apocalypse stories. For some reason, a bimbo apocalypse seems scarier than a zombie apocalypse.

Otherwise, I find it to be macho dreck.
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tomjhyde Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
I'm not sure if I want that spray or if I want it to be used on me...

This story felt a little more rushed than your previous one. I would recommend allowing the transformation to go a little slower. I also agree with your comment about the ending. Maybe have the spray's effects last a bit longer and have Nicole enjoy herself with someone else.

I would love to see some variants of the spray in the future, too. You have such a promising idea here and I can't wait for more!
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Tiberius-Aires Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009
Just out of curiosity, what originally inspired you to write this story?

Nice work, by the way.
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Firingwall Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
The Axe/Tag Body Spray commericals. I figured if you're going to act like a slut after smelling that stuff, you may as well look like one.
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Tiberius-Aires Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
Good point. *Nods.*
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rockyrhodes Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009
dude, how about the brother that the body-spray belongs to shows it to a friend, and after demonstrating, the friend sprays himself, starting at the face, swallows some on accident, and TGs.
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