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“I don’t think this story is very good,” Rachel said to Firingwall firmly as she read his newest story over his shoulders, “You are just rehashing the old transformation and it isn’t as interesting as the original one was.”

“I don’t need to hear this from you!” Firingwall said to her as he worked on the computer, “Speaking of, why are you reading over my shoulder and why are you reading that story in particular?  It isn’t targeted towards you.”

“I know that,” she said, “I just like reading your stories and I am reading over your shoulders because you won’t let me read it.  Is it because this story seems more perverted than…”

“Will you get out of here?!” he snapped at her.

“No way,” she said spinning him around to face her in his office chair, “After this story, I think you really need to step it up so you can bring people back to you.  You bombed on this one so you need to revive better than ever!”

“I didn’t bomb on that story!” he said, “I was experimenting with my writing in it, but I will agree with you that I need to step it up so I come back stronger.  What do you propose I do?”

“Simple!” she said excitedly as she grabbed a camcorder off the side desk in the room, “We make a cool video that will entice everyone back J.D.!”

“I was thinking more along the lines of a sequel to The Brother or a whole new original story with a neat twist,” he said.

“That is BORING!” she said, “That would be what everyone is expecting you to do!  But you aren’t going to do that at all!  You’ll shock them by making an awesome video that’ll make him say, ‘Gee, the Firingwall guy is cool and smoking hot, that I want to marry and have his kids,’ or some crap like that.”

“Ah…” he said, “Where did you get that from?”

“My mind.”

“That’s what is creeping me out a bit right now,” he said nervously.

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Later that day, Rachel invited J.D. into the basement of their house and showed him what she has been doing to set up for the video.  She set up the camera on a tripod, put up a large, white tarp that covered the right wall and part of the ground, moved everything to side so that nothing would be by the tarp, and had placed a large cardboard box next to the tripod.  “What do you think of our studio?” she said as she strolled over to the camera.

“It looks like a porn shoot to me,” he said.

“Hey!” she said, “There’s an idea!”

“WHAT?!” he shouted.

“Kidding!” she said with a giggle as she turned on the camera and started to set things up, “I just want to see your expression!  Anyways, go stand in the middle of the tarp so we can start.”

J.D. nodded and walked over to the spot.  “Alright,” Rachel said as she began to roll the film, “We are live at 3… 2… 1… action!”

“Ah…” he said, “Hi… this is Firingwall… nice to finally say with my real voice that I am honored to have such a nice fan base and I do appreciate you all.  This video is being made to make up for the last story if you didn’t like it.  If you did like it, then this is just a bonus for you… Rachel… what do I say or do now?”

“Just a moment!” she said as she pulled out a brown book from the box and flipped it open, “Let’s see here… here we go!  Activate Seal!”  Suddenly, a green glowing circle appeared around him.

“What the…” he said.  He tried then to step out of the circle, but as he did, he bonked into an invisible wall.  He tapped the edge and followed it around until he realized he was trapped inside the circle.  He then said angrily to Rachel, “What is with the circle?”

“Cool isn’t it?” she said, “You put things in, but things can’t be taken out unless the circle is inactivated!  I did this so we can put on a good show for everyone!”

“Gentlemen and to whoever ladies that are viewing this,” Rachel said as she stepped into the camera focus, “This is Firingwall’s totally hot slime girlfriend, Rachel.  We will be doing something fun for everyone here today with this video.  You all like his stories because he does different types of transformations, so guess what?  We are about to do a bunch of special transformations for you now! We’ll start with the basic one you all enjoy, the TG transformation!”

“WHAT?!” he shouted at her, “I’m not doing this to be turned into a girl!  There are better ways to make the fans happy!”

“But this will be so much more awesome!” she stated as she flipped through the book and then looked at him with a grin as she raised her hand at him, “Everyone will love it!  Now, let us begin!  Cal-I-Fry Girl-Su-Ni!”  A blue beam fired from her hands, struck him in the chest, and seeped into his body.

There was a dead silence in the room, followed by a groan from J.D.  He clutched his chest tightly as his body morphed into a more appealing figure.  His short blond hair lengthen significantly to the point where it reached his hips.  His face soften and changed into a normal looking girl’s.  From there, the magic worked down and shrank his body into a feminine build.  Then two B-Cup size breasts burst forward and slightly pushed against his now huge t-shirt.  Finally, the magic ended in his hip area where they slightly rounded, his butt slightly enlarged, and his male part change into a female part.

“Ah…” J.D. said in her new girlish voice, “This is too weird!”

“Hoped you like that folks,” Rachel said as she ignored him and walked over to the box, “We are just getting started!  For the next part, I know how you boys love those bimbos changes in his story, so we’ll do that next for you.  If you remember his story, The Date, there was a can of body spray that invoked a physical and sexy change in a girl who smelt it.  I have here, a can of body spray that will actually do that!”

“Eeekk!” J.D. shrieked as Rachel pulled out a can from the box and slowly approached him, “Don’t do this Rachel!  This is crazy!  This is an insane!  This is… ooohhh… amazing… what a wonderful aroma… I feel so giggly.”  The slime girl sprayed J.D., covering him in a mist of body spray.

After she finished spraying, J.D.’s body immediately reacted.  Her facial changes came first with plump lips, long eyelashes, thin eyebrows, and great cheek structure.  The change then came into her breasts, which ballooned up into a bouncy pair of D-Cups.  Finally, her hips and asses expanded even more, causing her jeans to rip and the top of her cheeks to be exposed.

“Whoa,” Rachel said as she observed her ‘boyfriend’ grow into a busty lady like herself, “This spray works so cool on you, Jessie!  Let me try!”

She sprayed herself and inhaled the spray deeply.  Her jeans’ button popped off as her hips and bottom increased a few more inches.  Her breasts then started to tingle and increase in size again.  She stroked them happily and giggled a bit as her breasts increased to a size E.  Her shirt also split down the middle, allowing for more of her cleavage to be revealed then what was already being showed by her low cut top.

“Wow,” she sighed, “They feel so perky!”

“Oh I know,” Jessie said as she stroked her own intensely, “These feel magnificent… KYA!  I’m an idiot!  I’m slowly losing my mind damn it!  Rachel, fix me right now and do not call me JESSIE!”

“Oh hush you,” she said with a high pitch giggle.  She diverted her gaze on the camera and said, “Now then, I am sure a bunch of you like clothing changes, am I right?  I’ll say I’m right.  Anyways, let’s give Firingwall, the now the lovely Jessie, the perfect ware for the beach!”

She pulled out a tin can with the label, “Bikini Goop.”  She opened it up with a can opener, which was also in the box, and poured out a big pink glop into her hand.  She then tossed it directly into Jessie’s chest, like she was throwing a fast ball.

The goo made a loud splat upon contact.  The goo began to seep into her shirt, then into her pants, and finally onto her tennis shoes.  Once it was completely dissolved into her clothing, all her apparel she was wearing turned bright pink.

“The color is cute on me…” she said without thinking, “But it looks strange…”  As soon as she spoke that, her shoes morphed into pink flip flops.  Following that, her pants’ legs shrank upwards until they resembled short shorts.  Her pants then finally morphed into a small, pink bikini bottom.

The shirt’s hemline then shrank upwards a couple of inches, until it revealed the bottom of her breasts.  The neckline expanded down, revealing her cleavage.  Her sleeves shrunk back into her shirt, forming spaghetti straps.  Then with this, the rest of the shirt formed into a string bikini that fit perfectly on her, despite her large mounds.

“Wow,” Jessie said as she looked down on her bikini and felt her bikini bottom with her hands, “This feels pretty good.  The bikini and bottom fit perfectly and are so comfortable!  I am quite impressed that you found something like this.”

“I am impressed as well,” Rachel said, now sporting her own pink bikini, “I’m not fond of the color blue, but I love how it made my shirt and shorts into matching and fitting bikini and bottom combo.  I see that you are liking this as well sweetie.”

“Just because I like how convenient it is,” she explained, “Doesn’t mean that I like how I am now… despite how pretty I am.”

“I heard that!” Rachel said excited as she pulled out a plastic bag full of some kind of grounded up spice or herb, “You are slowly learning how to like this.  Now back to everyone will be watching this video.  I will give you all something that the cat lovers will enjoy!”

She sprinkled some of the grounded herb into her hand and blew it into Jessie’s face.  She coughed a bit and sneezed as well with it flew into her face, but she ended up inhaling some of it.  “What was with that?” she asked her slime friend, “What was with that stuff?”

Rachel only giggled in reply, causing Jessie to worry a bit.  However, the feeling soon vanished and was replaced by peacefulness and pure bliss.  She sighed happy as two large, blond cat ears bursts out from underneath her hair while a long blond tail grew out from above her butt.

She giggled and smiled brightly, showing her two long canine teeth.  “I feel so giddy and pleasant!” Jessie sighed again, “What was that wonderful stuff?”

“That stuff was specially made catnip that brings out the cat in a person!” Rachel said happily, “I bet you are happy now!”

“Nya, of course I am silly!  Now that I finally truly realized how incredible it is to be like this, I am in debt to you.  Nya only that, you also helped me make a perfect video for my fans to love and enjoy!”

“That’s great!” Rachel said, “Now I can let you out! De-Active Seal!”

The green light died out and her friend ran up to her cheerfully.  Rachel stroked Jessie’s head and she emitted a soft purring sound.  She then glanced at the camera, “That’s it folks!  I hope you enjoyed the video and we hope to do more in the future for all of you!  Now Firingwall, I mean Jessie, is there anything you like to say to all of your darling fans?”

“Nya!” she said, “Of course there is!  I would like to thank all of you for your support and feedback to me.  Now, please enjoy as I beat Rachel senseless!!”  Jessie than launched a quick sucker punch at Rachel’s face.  The girl quickly ducked, avoiding the hit, and jumped to the side in surprise.

“What was with that?” Rachel asked confused and stunned at her friend’s sudden burst of rage, “Why are you upset and angry when you were so happy and carefree a second ago?”

“It is true that I was happy and carefree,” Jessie said, “But that was because of the catnip that calmed me down, but nya I am extremely angry at you for turning me into a bimbo cat girl!”

“Oh come on!” Rachel said, “It was for the fans, I would turned you back when we were done, and plus it can help inspire you to write more stories!”

“They are not good enough reasons for turning me into this!” she snarled, “Nya, prepare yourself!  BONAZI!”  She then pounced onto Rachel and they both then spent the next few minutes slapping, punching, and pulling each others’ hair.

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“RACHEL!” Firingwall shouted in horror, “WHY IS THAT VIDEO ONLINE!?”  It was a few days later and Rachel had just called him into the computer room to show him something online.  Both of them had returned back to normal and had gone on normally with their lives up until this point.

“Oh come on!” she said to him cheerfully, “This was for all your fans!  Why let all that time and camera footage go to waste?”

“Because it is extremely embarrassing for me!” he said, “I look like a bimbo!”

“You were one.”

“You want to rumble?!” he said angrily.

“Why?” she asked with a smirk, “So I can win again?”  He then dropped his head in shame and in defeat.

“That’s not what is so cool!” she stated, “Look at some of these comments left by your fans!”  He looked at the screen and read a few of the comments.

[Dude, you are so f-ing hot as a cat girl!]

[What an awesome and creative away to do something cool for all of us!]

[I love all the acting!  It seemed like you almost were upset about turning into a hawt girl :}]

[I am slightly disappointed that neither of your tops came off during the fight, but other than that, it was great video!  How long did it take you to choreograph that fight?]

[That slime girl, Rachel, is so cool and pretty!  Can I get some shots of her posing in a bikini?]

[You personally did not have to do this since I was fine with your story, but I still love the gesture and digged the video!  Can you change yourself into a dog or slime girl next time?]

“Wow!” Rachel said happily, “Look at all the nice responses you got!  I can’t believe they all thought it was real to!  Neat huh?”

“I’m so embarrassed…” he moaned as he staggered out of the room, “I’m just going to crawl in bed with a bottle of Mountain Dew.”

“Oh sweetie!” she said as she chased after him, “Don’t do that!  How about next time we just change me?”
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As you may suspect, this story was made in order to make up for the last story. Some people didn't like it and I do think I didn't do my best on the last story. So this one can make up for it. If you liked the last story, so consider this a bonus!

As you may also suspect, this story is a shout out to all my fans who enjoy my work and find it amusing. As such, I took the time to spell and grammar check it and add a good amount of humor to it.

One last thing, I used the brackets at the end just for the Internet comments to tell them apart from the regular dialogue spoken by myself and Rachel and so that it wouldn't seem like there were other people in the room.

Anyways, enjoy!
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:icongiygas1:
I like the concept of Rachel, she seems like the kind of crazy woman I would like to meet, and the bimbos in a box things was creative, 2 did seem... Lacking, I mean no disrespect
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:iconsircarlsson:
good work, this was great!
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:iconthestorywriter:
~TheStoryWriter Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice story man, I liked it and what story was this to make up for another work?
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:iconfiringwall:
This story was to make up for the Bimbos in A Box 2 story. Some say it wasn't as good as the original and I partically agree with it, so I thought I tell a story about how 'I' would make up for it.
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~TheStoryWriter Oct 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh. pretty funny now that I read that story too.
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:iconrogue7:
Great story :) Interesting imagery :)
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:icondoomed-swordmaster:
*doomed-swordmaster Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
hay good story, you do great stuff so smile
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:iconpeachlover42:
Awesome story and a great comeback, nice work man! Sucks that your fictional-self lost the fight. XD But there's always another day.
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:iconblasianstrike:
Hawtness as always! Rachel tfs would also be noce XD
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:iconfiringwall:
Actually, my next story will have me and her in it again. Their be a special change in it for her.
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